你是

我的火光.

So here is one of my cover songs that I did about 5 months back. This song is called "Quiet Comforts" composed by an artist named "Worldismarble".



Please critique!

Not sure how to critique?

Heres a couple of things to watch out for:

1. Tone -Tone is VERY important. Can't be flat, can't be sharp on the notes. In short the singer (in this case, me) is not "Off Key". If everyone was off key I would never listen to music haha
   
2. Pronounciation- Its not a BIG deal but most people want to actually understand the lyrics someone is singing right? Not someone mumbling, screaming or not making any sense.
3. Consistency- So basically any "slip-ups" of any sort...or random stopping of the singing.
4. Dynamics- So if the section of the section is supposed to be loud or soft or if the section is supposed to be sung in a stronger voice or not.

That's the basic stuff that you should be looking for...as far as I remember right now haha I will edit the list if I can think of anything else.

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Lyrics (Credited to Worldismarble):

Lyrics
What a long day now sitting alone, enjoying the quiet comforts of home
I hear you whispering songs to yourself, softly forming the words that make me melt

You stay where you are, you stay who you are
Everything you do opens up my heart
I will follow you, I will wait for you
Never knowing where love is taking you

Why dont we go there why dont we fly
If we fall in the sea hope keeps us dry
All you can give me, all I can take
Are the coincidences within fate
And you

Oh

You never need to tell me what you think I see your eyes with the thoughts wandering
Past all the marmalade made up stories into the depths of your hidden fancies

Its the way you are, its the heart you are
That keeps telling me you wont stray too far
From the life we live, from the life we give
To the silences that can take us in

Why dont we go there why dont we stay
Ill hold on tight in case we drift away
All you can give me, all I can take
Are the coincidences within fate
And you

So believe me when I say that I am willing to disappear with you
So believe me when I tell you that Ill follow
Everything you do, every chance you take
Ill be holding your, your love in place
Even if you fall if you make mistakes
Ill be loving you every single day

Why dont we go there why dont we fly
If we fall in the sea hope keeps us dry
All you can give me, all I can take
Are the coincidences within fate
And you

Labels: Music Cover, Quiet Comforts, Singing, Worldismarble